Feedback Journal: Graduate Writing I

Name:

Use this journal to record the writing feedback you receive. Please update and submit this table by Day 7 of Weeks 2 through 5.

I have more than 3 million academic words written. I have also published 5 books. I am working on writing a couple textbooks. I have collected more than 600 peer review references.

Date	Piece of writing (title, description, etc.)	Area where excelled	Issue to work on	Resources to review	Plan for revision / future writing Optional: Questions to ask the instructor or the Writing Center
9 12 2019	Leonardo Da Vinci	Most of them	Not many	none	Turning my 5 books on leo into a sequence of lessons inside of larger subjects.
9 15	History	Most of them	Not many	none	This weeks teaching assignment is helping to shape my writing into a different type of textbook I was not expecting. I did not understand how to write a syllabus before now.
9 21	History	Most of them	Not many	none	This class was a struggle, not because I do not know how to do all of this but because I had to fight through huge amounts of frustration in trying to explain how to do things I have done by route for a decade.
9 27	History	Most of them	Not many	none	Not much, I had a couple really good ideas about freud this week which I wrote most of what my ideas down into a book format which will not be mentioned in class. but I have ideas all the time. right now I am working on decoding an intense aspect of the ceremony of memento mori which is actually an intensely complex sequence of ceremonies dating back to ancient Egypt. directly connected to the Roman Schema Janus